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Posted in Original, Poetry, Writing by netscheri on May 6, 2008

Dear Sir
Please hold
A member of our staff will be with you shortly.

Good Evening.
Thank you for your submission.
But we are afraid to say that there is something
almost obscene
about your latest writing.
We are afraid that we shall not be able to publish it
unless you
correct it.
Your lines are too thin. We are afraid that we can see something
almost like truth.
We are afraid that there is something
almost too stark
in the body of your piece. And it reminds us of bone.
Please edit it. And erase those profanities.

We hope you understand,
That we must have substance.
And until you improve your work,
We will not be able to continue.

 

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Posted in Thoughts, Writing by netscheri on May 6, 2008

All the writing on here, any of it, I find that I don’t like it. I don’t like it as my own work, and I’m not very impressed by it either. So. Expect some great editing, stylistic overhaul in the near future.